AJA Feedback

1.     Evaluate your prelim task, discussing strengths and weaknesses. What you have learnt that will make you do things differently in the main task?

2.     Post the conventions task

3.     Post the mindmap task

4.     Analysis work is too brief and descriptive. Try to analyse in more depth, discussing why different techniques have been used to appeal to the audience (see me for help if required). Also, make sure you embed all the video clips you have analysed.

5.     Make sure all posts have a clear title: Analysis of Transformers opening sequence, for example

6.     Use more images and make your blog really visual/interactive. Avoid only text – your post about 180 degree rule etc, for example. You should have used images/video here.

7.     Post regular progress reports on your blog – treat it like a diary 

8.     Try to come up with more of your own planning/research tasks to show your own creative journey

9.   Post your moodboard

10. Post your focus group and evaluation

11. Post your questionnaire results and evaluation

Not good enough Maya. You have not posted anything for nearly 1 month and are now very behind. Much more effort required if you want to continue on this course. The expectation is that you complete this work at home as well as in class. Others are up to date mostly, so there is no reason why you should be so behind. See above tasks and complete immediately.